I love opening lines. The great ones hook, grip, and surprise you. They also evoke the mood of the book and the voice of the narrator…and if you’re really lucky, the emotion of the story. All in a line.
I’ve always worn my ‘geek hat’ when it comes to first lines. With my third novel in the USA Today bestselling REBEL ANGELS series releasing next week (VAMPIRE DEVIL), I’ll be posting the beginnings of each novel to give you a taste. Here are Two of My Favourite First Lines from my own series.
From BLOOD RENEGADES in the REBEL VAMPIRES series:
Betrayal. Death. Hope. Isn’t that how all truly great stories start?
From VAMPIRE PRINCESS in the REBEL ANGELS series:
Vampires? Angels? I hunt the bastards because they hunt me.
Here’s my pick of the 5 Best Opening Lines in Fantasy:
5. Jim Butcher Blood Rites
The building was on fire, and it wasn’t my fault.
4. Lev Grossman The Magicians:
Quentin did a magic trick. No one noticed.
3. Jacqueline Carey Kushiel’s Dart:
Lest anyone should suppose that I am a cuckoo’s child, got on the wrong side of a blanket by lusty peasant stock and sold into indenture in a shortfallen season, I may say that I am House-born and reared in the Night Court proper, for all the good it did me.
2. Mark Lawrence Prince of Fools
I’m a liar and a cheat and a coward, but I will never, ever, let a friend down. Unless of course not letting them down requires honesty, fair play, or bravery.
- Stephen King The Gunslinger
The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.
As we’re talking first lines, here’s a sneak peek at the first line of VAMPIRE DEVIL (out now on pre-order):
I reign over a valley of feathers and bones: death, the End, destroyer. Half vampire, half angel, I’m a monster amongst monsters.
What first lines would you’ve chosen?











Here are 5 Reasons Game of Thrones Is Addictive:





Today I discovered that the second book in the REBEL VAMPIRES series,
Hunted by humans, Light’s bought by his enemy’s daughter.


My short story – HOW TO SCALP A DOLL – was commissioned for this special first edition.



1.Tell us where and when were you born.
3. Tell us about where you grew up.
humans the prey? I was wrong about that too. I may battle for redemption but the battle for my species’ freedom – for the right to love, family and home – that one I’m still fighting.

That’s the rallying cry – or the misfit call to individuality at the heart of my series
5. V for Vandetta: Alan Moore. V is an anarchist: violent and vengeful. His porcelain Guy Fawkes mask is also the influence for Anonymous and activist groups in the real world. How’s that for subversive fiction?
3. The Dispossessed: Ursula K. Le. Guin. The unlikely rebel here is a physicist. How he rebels? By questioning: neither the anarchy of one world not the pacifism of the other is perfect. There’s no such place as Utopia? Yeah, got it.
1. A Song of Ice and Fire: George R. R. Martin. Where to start? The whole series is a sequence of political machinations, military campaigns, and rebellions. The obvious is Robert’s Rebellion but the one that sums up the spirit..? It’s the Mother of Dragons’ attempts to give the control back to the slaves, so they’ll free themselves in Slavers Bay. Daenerys is the ultimate rebel: against her place in life, her gender, her role and for freedom. What’s not to love?

From my days as a teenager spellbound by the world of Buffy the Vampire Slayer every week (dangerous thrills wrapped in snarky comedy…learn from the best), I’ve loved the idea that fantasy can be empowering…and fun.
Light is a Blood Lifer and Kathy is a human. Their love is forbidden. In the wild 1960s Light realises that not as much divides the species as he’s always been taught. That maybe Blood Life isn’t about freedom but control.
My main character’s chief talent is his photographic memory: living as a vampire and witnessing all the glories and horrors, this becomes both a blessing and a curse.


